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you sank
holding on

grabbing tightly
pleaded
snarled

i am sorry
i could not
let mysef
go
happy insect
crushed
by the weight
of molten sugar
decorating
vast plastic remains
in a stained cup
god is
not
a wo/man
a religion(s)
or even a god
god
is choosing
not to hurt
others
because
you can
willgood
A bit preachy but I like it. God bless us, everyone.
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sun dull
still sea
not kind to
age

beyond ivory
and pale

moving with heavy bones
instead of muscle

broken hands,
fish skeleton things
let go
finally

anchor sinks
rope follows suit
he is not left behind
hustling city avenue
bursting noise,
this old man,
burning,
beneath the sun
roams,
slowly, angry
carefully treading,
to not wake
the stray
sick, dirty,
dreaming in his arms
behindleft
This image of two creatures ignored by the noisy world caught my eye, I don't think I've captured the moment. Need more practice.
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Lets see if I can do better.
  • Listening to: the night grin
  • Reading: about film theory
  • Watching: smoke rings fade
  • Playing: with a rubber band, ouch

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ssensory Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student Writer
I really like your poetry. I hope you write more! :heart:
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photosynthetichuman Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014
Thank you, going to try.
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ssensory Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student Writer
You're welcome!
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xKrittterz Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome to :iconlove-literature:!! If you have any questions, feel free to ask anyone really. We all love to help our group expand and grow. :) :heart:
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photosynthetichuman Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
Thank you. Looking forward to being in the group.
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hazeltown Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i like your words
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photosynthetichuman Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
Yours aren’t bad either. Hah, who do I kid, they're damn good. Congratulations on being member of the month.
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