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hustling city avenue
bursting noise,
this old man,
beneath the sun
slowly, angry
carefully treading,
to not wake
the stray
sick, dirty,
dreaming in his arms
This image of two creatures ignored by the noisy world caught my eye, I don't think I've captured the moment. Need more practice.
ivory statue
shining, smooth, scorching
all her cracks
out of sight
under the fragile sand
a fleck or two
nothing i mind
too much
till you start
gathering in my hair
grating across limbs
crushing crusty joints
breaking off digits
distortion of the spine
human nail beaten
by the simple gravity
of your rusty memory
aligned coordinates
for lateral running
walking parallel
side-by-side still
waiting for the next move
around the curve
as we
never get closer
lines into infinity
i like to stay up thinking about you
and me
till those image swaying thoughts
of you and me
burn across retinas and into eye-lids
only mine
Not so sure about this one, let me know what you think internet vagabond.
Lets see if I can do better.
  • Listening to: the night grin
  • Reading: about film theory
  • Watching: smoke rings fade
  • Playing: with a rubber band, ouch


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ssensory Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student Writer
I really like your poetry. I hope you write more! :heart:
photosynthetichuman Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014
Thank you, going to try.
ssensory Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student Writer
You're welcome!
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xKrittterz Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome to :iconlove-literature:!! If you have any questions, feel free to ask anyone really. We all love to help our group expand and grow. :) :heart:
photosynthetichuman Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
Thank you. Looking forward to being in the group.
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hazeltown Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i like your words
photosynthetichuman Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
Yours aren’t bad either. Hah, who do I kid, they're damn good. Congratulations on being member of the month.
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